Story Scene #2

Hi! I’ve been working on and off on another scene for my story that I’ve decided I will write (check out my first story scene here) and finally I got something. I’m not sure where this will be placed in the story, so far my thoughts have been a mess, so this is just a scene that I recently put together.

‘I’m bleeding this time. Slowly. I feel the pain being drawn out yet I’m strangely detached from it all. I look down, and see the puddle of red crowding my vision. This isn’t normal, my brain tries to tell me. But I feel so tired, so sleepy. I’ll just lie down for a bit, I tell myself. Then I’ll clean up the mess. My vision doubles, and I know in the back of my mind that I should do something about the loss of blood. But there’s no time to do anything about it before I feel my body fold upon itself. The last thing I see is a knife, aiming towards my heart.’

This one’s a shorter one, but it’s all I’ve been able to come up with. I’ve been starting and erasing several scenes lately, but I think this one is adequate. What do you think? I really need the feedback! Please let me know what you thought of this scene in the comments below. ❤

Until next time!

-A

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Stone Cold Touch by Jennifer L. Armentrout | Book Review

(The Dark Elements #2)

Published: October 21st 2014 (originally August 11th 2014)

Synopsis:

Every touch has its price.

Layla Shaw is trying to pick up the pieces of her shattered life—no easy task for a seventeen-year-old who’s pretty sure things can’t get worse. Her impossibly gorgeous best friend, Zayne, is forever off-limits thanks to the mysterious powers of her soul-stealing kiss. The Warden clan that has always protected her is suddenly keeping dangerous secrets. And she can barely think about Roth, the wickedly hot demon prince who understood her in ways no one else could.

But sometimes rock bottom is only the beginning. Because suddenly Layla’s powers begin to evolve, and she’s offered a tantalizing taste of what has always been forbidden. Then, when she least expects it, Roth returns, bringing news that could change her world forever. She’s finally getting what she always wanted, but with hell literally breaking loose and the body count adding up, the price may be higher than Layla is willing to pay…


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My Rating: 5 stars 5/5 (Outstanding)

Book Information

Publisher: Harlequin-Teen

Genre(s): YA Paranormal Romance, Fantasy

Page Count: 446

Format: Paperback

ISBN: 0373211341


Used for the Popsugar challenge: A book with a love triangle

This review is way overdue, much like my Pride and Prejudice one (which will be coming soon!). I loved re-reading this book, so I have no idea what made me delay this review so much, but either way, let’s get started! Like the first book, I rate this again 5 stars, and read on to find out why!

Quick Summary

Stone Cold Touch picks up from where White Hot Kiss ended, where our protagonist Layla is still reeling from the events of the last book and is trying to adjust with Roth’s sacrifice (no spoilers, don’t worry!). Just when she has gotten some sense of normalcy back into her life, Roth comes back into her life with startling news for her and the Wardens: a Lilin has somehow been born. A powerful demon that’s the offspring of the demon Lilith, a Lilin can turn humans into wraiths (suck out their soul, basically) and its escape seems to be Layla’s fault. Read More »